From 0feefc9f4545d7fd6e0f21c7988faea6669f09a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Douglas R. Reno" <renodr@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Wed, 16 Aug 2023 14:18:24 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] pm-utils: minor reword of the warning about using it on
 systemd.

---
 general/sysutils/pciutils.xml |  2 +-
 general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml | 12 ++++++------
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml b/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
index 745252e9d3..844ba02e5e 100644
--- a/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
+++ b/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ systemctl enable update-pciids.timer</userinput></screen>
       <term><filename class="libraryfile">libpci.so</filename></term>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          is library that allows applications to access the PCI
+          is a library that allows applications to access the PCI
           subsystem
         </para>
         <indexterm zone="pciutils libpci">
diff --git a/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml b/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml
index d047f9a46d..d3ea2cb064 100644
--- a/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml
+++ b/general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml
@@ -33,13 +33,13 @@
 
     <note revision='systemd'>
       <para>
-        On a system using <application>Systemd</application> as the init
-        system, <application>Systemd</application> already provides these
-        functionalities so this package is likely unneeded and it may
-        conflict with <application>Systemd</application>.  Read the
-        document for <filename>suspend.target</filename> and
+        On a system using <application>systemd</application> as the init
+        system, <application>systemd</application> already provides this
+        functionality. As a result, this package is probably not needed, and it
+        may conflict with <application>systemd</application>.  Read the
+        documentation for <filename>suspend.target</filename> and
         <filename>hibernate.target</filename> in the man page
-        <filename>systemd.special(7)</filename> for details.
+        <filename>systemd.special(7)</filename> for more details.
       </para>
     </note>