Various text updates and link corrections reported on the lists.

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Dan Nichilson 2006-08-29 06:52:36 +00:00
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<!ENTITY day "09"> <!-- Always 2 digits -->
<!ENTITY day "29"> <!-- Always 2 digits -->
<!ENTITY month "08"> <!-- Always 2 digits -->
<!ENTITY year "2006">
<!ENTITY version "svn-&year;&month;&day;">

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<listitem>
<para>August 29th, 2006</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>[dnicholson] - Fixed the download link for the
Linux-PAM docs. Thanks to Tor Olav Slava.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>[dnicholson] - Removed the reference to the vimrc
question in the FAQ since it no longer exists. Thanks to
Peter Ennis.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>[dnicholson] - Minor text update on the bootdisk page.
Thanks to Peter Ennis.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>August 9th, 2006</para>
<itemizedlist>

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printed version of the Linux From Scratch book. If you download the ISO
image, use <xref linkend='cdrecord'/> to copy the image to a CD-ROM.</para>
<para>A hint that describes the instructions for creating this ISO imate
is available as a hint at <ulink
<para>A hint that describes the instructions for creating this ISO image
is available at <ulink
url='http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/hints/downloads/files/livecd.txt'/>.
</para>

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" End .vimrc</literal></screen>
<para>A FAQ on the LFS mailing lists regards the comment tags in
<filename>vimrc</filename>. Note that they are " instead of the more
<para>Note that the comment tags are " instead of the more
usual # or //. This is correct, the syntax for
<filename>vimrc</filename> is slightly unusual.</para>

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<!ENTITY linux-pam-size "783 KB">
<!ENTITY linux-pam-buildsize "19.8 MB">
<!ENTITY linux-pam-time "0.5 SBU">
<!ENTITY linux-pam-docs-download "http://www.kernel.org/pub/linux/libs/pam/pre/library/Linux-PAM-&linux-pam-version;-docs.tar.bz2">
<!ENTITY linux-pam-docs-download "http://www.kernel.org/pub/linux/libs/pam/pre/doc/Linux-&linux-pam-version;-docs.tar.bz2">
]>
<sect1 id="linux-pam" xreflabel="Linux-PAM-&linux-pam-version;">