finally some typos and minor wording changes in Part 11

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@1256 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

index.xml

@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.1.2//EN" 
 			"/usr/share/docbook/docbookx.dtd" [
 
-<!ENTITY version "20030929">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "September 29th, 2003">
+<!ENTITY version "20031001">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "October 1st, 2003">
 <!ENTITY blfs-version "cvs">
 
 <!ENTITY % book SYSTEM "book/book.ent">

xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo-config.xml

@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@
 <title>Configuring <application>Dillo</application></title>
 
 <sect3><title>Config files</title>
-<para>Site-wide configuration can be done using <filename>/etc/dillorc</filename>.  
+<para>System configuration can be done using <filename>/etc/dillorc</filename>.  
 This can be edited to define proxies and the default home page.</para>
 </sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
-<para><application>Dillo</application> stores its configuration in per-user 
-files in their <filename class="directory">~/.dillo</filename>
+<para><application>Dillo</application> stores its configuration in by user 
+in their <filename class="directory">~/.dillo</filename>
 directory. These files are created automatically when
 <command>dillo</command> is run.
 By default <application>Dillo</application> has cookies turned off, to turn 

xsoft/graphweb/galeon/galeon-desc.xml

@@ -16,7 +16,8 @@
 
 <sect3><title>galeon-config-tool</title>
 <para><command>galeon-config-tool</command> clears settings, installs schemas, 
-removes schemas and fixes permissions in gconf.</para></sect3>
+removes schemas and fixes permissions in the
+<application>GConf</application> database.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
 

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ recommends installation in a system wide prefix such as <filename>/usr
 toolkit</para>
 
 <para><screen><option>--with-system-zlib --with-system-jpeg \
---with-system-png --with-system-mng"</option></screen>
+--with-system-png --with-system-mng</option></screen>
 Use the system versions for these packages.</para>
 
 <para><option>--enable-xft</option>: Enable the Xft support. You need 

xsoft/office/evolution/evolution-inst.xml

@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ temporarily in order to install Evolution.</para></note>
 make &amp;&amp;
 make install</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Optionally, you may remove the installed db-&db-3.1-version;</para>
+<para>Optionally, you may remove <application>Berkeley
+DB</application>-&db-3.1-version; installed above with this command:</para>
 <screen><userinput><command>rm -rf /opt/db-&db-3.1-version;</command></userinput></screen>
 
 </sect2>

xsoft/office/gimp/gimp-config.xml

@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
 
 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-<para><command>gimp</command> executes a configuration wizard for each users 
-upon their initial invocation of the program.
-</para>
+<para><application><acronym>GIMP</acronym></application> executes a 
+configuration wizard for each users upon their initial invocation of the 
+program.</para>
 </sect3>
 
 </sect2>

xsoft/suites/openoffice/openoffice-inst.xml

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ commands. The following commands install the English language set. To install a
 01 by the international telephone country code for your country. Note that when
 installing, it needs a <application>X</application> Display, even though there 
 is no visible <application>X</application> window. You
-can use <application>>Xvfb</application> if you are compiling on a console.</para>
+can use <application>Xvfb</application> if you are compiling on a console.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cd instsetoo/unxlngi4.pro/01/normal &amp;&amp;
 cp install install.orig &amp;&amp;