Minor rewords/text changes for Shadow/Util-Linux

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Douglas R. Reno 2021-12-27 13:27:09 -06:00
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2 changed files with 9 additions and 9 deletions

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@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ make</userinput></screen>
<para>
<parameter>--without-su</parameter>: Don't reinstall
<command>su</command> because the upstream recommends to use the
<command>su</command> because upstream recommends using the
<command>su</command> command from <xref linkend='util-linux'/>
when <application>Linux-PAM</application> is available.
</para>

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@ -35,9 +35,9 @@
If you have installed <application>Linux-PAM</application>,
it's possible to build <command>su</command> and
<command>runuser</command> from <application>Util-linux</application>.
<application>Shadow</application> maintainers recommend to use
<command>su</command> from <application>Util-linux</application>,
instead of <application>Shadow</application>.
The <application>Shadow</application> maintainers recommend using
<command>su</command> from <application>Util-linux</application>
instead of the version from <application>Shadow</application>.
</para>
&lfs110a_checked;
@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
<command>su</command> and <command>runuser</command> will
automatically be built too. You should follow the
<xref linkend='pam-util-linux'/> to set up the PAM
configuration for them then.
configuration in this case.
</para>
</important>
@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ install -vm0644 sys-utils/{su,runuser}.1 /usr/share/man/man1</userinput></screen
is used to remove the man pages for <command>su</command> installed
from <application>Shadow</application>.
<application>Shadow</application> installs man pages with multiple
languages. They need to be removed to prevent
languages. They need to be removed to prevent
<command>man su</command> from picking up a translated man page
instead of <filename>/usr/share/man/man1/su.1</filename>.
</para>
@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
Any other error is the sign of an error in the above
procedure. You can also run the test suite from the
<application>Linux-PAM</application> package to assist you
in determining the problem.
in determining the cause of the problem.
</para>
</warning>
</sect4>
@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
<term><command>su</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
run a command with substitute user and group ID
runs a command with substitute user and group ID
</para>
<indexterm zone="util-linux su">
<primary sortas="b-su">su</primary>
@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
<term><command>runuser</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
run a command with substitute user and group ID; it's like
runs a command with substitute user and group ID; it's like
<command>su</command> but can only be used as
the <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user.
</para>