From 8f286422c1c4d7f999e113bc394bcaef196923c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Larry Lawrence Date: Wed, 1 Oct 2003 20:42:34 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Proper names, class=directory on chapter 35 git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@1258 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0 --- gnome/config/config-core.xml | 6 ++++-- gnome/config/config.xml | 4 ++++ gnome/other/gconf-editor.xml | 4 ++-- .../other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-desc.xml | 5 +++-- .../other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-inst.xml | 4 ++-- .../other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-intro.xml | 6 +++--- gnome/other/gdm.xml | 4 ++-- gnome/other/gdm/gdm-config.xml | 12 ++++++------ gnome/other/gdm/gdm-desc.xml | 11 ++++++----- gnome/other/gdm/gdm-exp.xml | 19 ++++++++++--------- gnome/other/gdm/gdm-inst.xml | 4 ++-- gnome/other/gdm/gdm-intro.xml | 7 ++++--- gnome/other/other.xml | 3 ++- 13 files changed, 50 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-) diff --git a/gnome/config/config-core.xml b/gnome/config/config-core.xml index 9e7987f587..feb14a2cf1 100644 --- a/gnome/config/config-core.xml +++ b/gnome/config/config-core.xml @@ -3,14 +3,16 @@ Configuring the core GNOME packages -Create an .xinitrc file to start GNOME: +Create an .xinitrc file to start +GNOME: echo "exec gnome-session" >> ~/.xinitrc and ensure all libraries can be found with: ldconfig -At this point you can bring up GNOME with +At this point you can bring up +GNOME with startx. diff --git a/gnome/config/config.xml b/gnome/config/config.xml index d9cdef0783..e1f7f9b985 100644 --- a/gnome/config/config.xml +++ b/gnome/config/config.xml @@ -2,6 +2,10 @@ Configuring GNOME +This chapter makes +GNOME your Desktop of +choice when startx is run. + &gnome-config-core; diff --git a/gnome/other/gconf-editor.xml b/gnome/other/gconf-editor.xml index b59fe3adac..456c0b2071 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gconf-editor.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gconf-editor.xml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + -gconf-editor-&gconf-editor-version; +GConf Editor-&gconf-editor-version; &gconf-editor-intro; &gconf-editor-inst; diff --git a/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-desc.xml b/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-desc.xml index 7e9b94e622..802431668b 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-desc.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-desc.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ Contents -The gconf-editor package contains +The GConf Editor package contains gconf-editor. @@ -9,7 +9,8 @@ Description gconf-editor -gconf-editor allows direct modification of the GConf +gconf-editor allows direct modification of the +GConf configuration database. diff --git a/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-inst.xml b/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-inst.xml index cb0010b55e..ed1f7746b1 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-inst.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-inst.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ -Installation of <application>gconf-editor</application> +Installation of <application>GConf Editor</application> -Install gconf-editor by running the following commands: +Install GConf Editor by running the following commands: ./configure --prefix=$GNOME_PREFIX && make && diff --git a/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-intro.xml b/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-intro.xml index 190067dd65..f3de5ef894 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-intro.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-intro.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ -Introduction to <application>gconf-editor</application> +Introduction to <application>GConf Editor</application> -The gconf-editor package contains a +The GConf Editor package contains a GUI editor for the GConf configuration database. @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ url="&gconf-editor-download-ftp;"/> &gconf-editor-time; -<application>gconf-editor</application> dependencies +<application>GConf Editor</application> dependencies Required diff --git a/gnome/other/gdm.xml b/gnome/other/gdm.xml index 2dadc8e3ec..0b0664b542 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gdm.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gdm.xml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + -gdm-&gdm-version; +GDM-&gdm-version; &gdm-intro; &gdm-inst; diff --git a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-config.xml b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-config.xml index 9b2df7f1a5..c5f1d0d98f 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-config.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-config.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ -Configuring <application>gdm</application> +Configuring <application>GDM</application> Config files /opt/gnome2/gdm.conf, /opt/gnome2/gnomerc @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Configuration Information -The gdm PAM +The GDM PAM config files contain modules not present in a BLFS installation. The following commands will replace those files: cat > /etc/pam.d/gdm << "EOF" @@ -44,24 +44,24 @@ source $rc_functions case "$1" in start) - echo "Starting gdm..." + echo "Starting GDM..." loadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/bin/gdm ;; stop) - echo "Stopping gdm..." + echo "Stopping GDM..." if [ -f /var/run/gdm.pid ]; then loadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/sbin/gdm-stop fi ;; reload) - echo "Reloading gdm..." + echo "Reloading GDM..." reloadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/sbin/gdm-safe-restart ;; restart) - echo "Restarting gdm..." + echo "Restarting GDM..." loadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/sbin/gdm-restart ;; diff --git a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-desc.xml b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-desc.xml index 68ae3cdb39..d73b7ea23d 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-desc.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-desc.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ Contents -The gdm package contains gdm, +The GDM package contains gdm, gdm-binary, gdmXnestchooser, gdmchooser, @@ -19,8 +19,9 @@ Description gdm -gdm is a wrapper script to execute gdm-binary, the configurable -GNOME-based login prompt. +gdm is a wrapper script to execute the +GDM binary, the configurable +GNOME based login prompt. gdmchooser gdmchooser is an application for selecting @@ -34,13 +35,13 @@ the local network. gdm-restart and gdm-safe-restart gdm-restart sends the HUP signal and gdm-safe-restart sends the -USR1 signal to the daemon so that it restarts. They are used after the +USR1 signal to the daemon so that it restarts. They are used after the config file is edited. gdmconfig gdmconfig is an application for managing the configuration of the entire GDM applications suite. It handles look and feel, security, -XDMCP, GDMchooser and more. +XDMCP, GDMchooser and more. diff --git a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-exp.xml b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-exp.xml index 9437801f3c..29270ca5df 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-exp.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-exp.xml @@ -1,17 +1,18 @@ Command explanations ---sysconfdir=/etc/gnome : This command puts -configuration files in /etc/gnome instead of -/opt/gnome2/etc. +--sysconfdir=/etc/gnome: This command puts +configuration files in /etc/gnome instead of +/opt/gnome2/etc. ---localstatedir=/var/lib : This command -puts files in /var/lib instead of -/opt/gnome2/var. +--localstatedir=/var/lib: This command +puts files in /var/lib instead of +/opt/gnome2/var. ---with-pam-prefix=/etc : This command puts pam -configuration files in /etc/pam.d instead of -/etc/gnome. +--with-pam-prefix=/etc: This command puts +PAM +configuration files in /etc/pam.d instead of +/etc/gnome. diff --git a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-inst.xml b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-inst.xml index 081cd968f0..abb53b7f3d 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-inst.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-inst.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ -Installation of <application>gdm</application> +Installation of <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> -Install gdm by running the following commands: +Install GDM by running the following commands: groupadd gdm && useradd -c gdm -d /dev/null -g gdm -s /bin/bash gdm && diff --git a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-intro.xml b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-intro.xml index 02dbe5827a..42575989c5 100644 --- a/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-intro.xml +++ b/gnome/other/gdm/gdm-intro.xml @@ -1,7 +1,8 @@ -Introduction to <application>gdm</application> +Introduction to <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> -The gdm package contains GNOME's display manager daemon. This is +The GDM package +contains GNOME's Display Manager daemon. This is useful for allowing configurable graphical logins. Package information @@ -17,7 +18,7 @@ url="&gdm-download-ftp;"/> &gdm-time; -<application>gdm</application> dependencies +<application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> dependencies Required and Optional diff --git a/gnome/other/other.xml b/gnome/other/other.xml index b4a791f9dc..b0849b6b8c 100644 --- a/gnome/other/other.xml +++ b/gnome/other/other.xml @@ -2,7 +2,8 @@ Other GNOME Packages -This section will contains other GNOME packages. +This section will contains other +GNOME packages. &gconf-editor; &gdm;