Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections by applying patches provided by Chris Staub - Thanks, Chris

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<para><application>GNOME</application> is the main alternative to
<application>KDE</application> in the Desktop Environment arena and
we cover both <application>GNOME</application>-1.4
and <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
we cover <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part X - X Software</bridgehead>

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<segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
<seg>gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional)</seg>
<seg>gsf, gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional), and gsf-vba-dump</seg>
<seg>libgsf-1.{so,a} and optionally, libgsf-gnome-1.{so,a}</seg>
<seg>/usr/include/libgsf-1 and /usr/share/gtk-doc/html/gsf</seg>
</seglistitem>

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<para><command>sed -i 's/null ;/null 2>\&amp;1 ;/'
update-pciids.sh</command>: This command suppresses some unneeded screen
output from the <command>update-pciids</command> command if you don't have
either <application>Lynx</application> or <application>Wget</application>
installed by redirecting the stderr output of the embedded
<command>which</command> command to <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
either <application>Lynx</application>, <application>Wget</application>,
or <application>Curl</application> installed by redirecting the stderr
output of the embedded <command>which</command> command to
<filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
</sect2>

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<para>The <application>gnome-audio</application> package contains a set
of default sounds for the <application>GNOME</application> GUI desktop.
Sound files for startup, shutdown and many GTK+ events are included.
These sounds compliment the <application>GNOME Media</application>
These sounds complement the <application>GNOME Media</application>
package.</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>

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<bridgehead renderas="sect3">GNOME Media Dependencies</bridgehead>
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
<para role="required"><xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/>,
<xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
<para role="required"><xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
<xref linkend="esound"/>, and
<xref linkend="libgnomeui"/></para>

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<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
<para role="required"><xref linkend="pango"/>,
<xref linkend="libart_lgpl"/>,
<xref linkend="fontconfig"/>,
<xref linkend="popt"/>,
<xref linkend="libxml2"/>, and
<xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/></para>

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<listitem>
<para>If you are having a problem compiling the package, try
searching the LFS archives at
<ulink url="http://search.&lfs-domainname;/"/> for the error or if
<ulink url="http://www.&lfs-domainname;/search.html"/> for the error or if
that fails, try searching Google. If everything else fails,
try the blfs-support mailing-list.</para>
</listitem>

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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para><ulink url="mailto:highos@&lfs-domainname;">Jesse
Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> &lt;higho &lt;at&gt; @&lfs-domainname;&gt; for
Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> &lt;higho &lt;at&gt; &lfs-domainname;&gt; for
answering many questions on IRC, having a great deal of patience and for
not killing the former editor for the joke in the original BLFS
announcement!</para>

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<para>October 16th, 2007</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>[name] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
<para>[randy] - Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections
by applying patches provided by Chris Staub. Thanks, Chris.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>[randy] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
GNOME-2.18.3 update.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>

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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Chapters 28 and 29: KDE:
<para>Chapters 28, 29, and 30: KDE:
<emphasis>Bruce Dubbs</emphasis>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Chapters 30, 31, and 32: GNOME:
<para>Chapters 31 and 32: GNOME:
<emphasis>Larry Lawrence</emphasis>.</para>
</listitem>

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<segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
<seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
kgpg, khexedit, kjots, kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager,
and superkaramba</seg>
<seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdessh, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
kgpg, khexedit, kjots, klaptop_acpi_helper, klaptop_check,
kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager, kwikdisk, and superkaramba</seg>
<seg>Several kdeutils specific libraries</seg>
<seg>Several subdirectories in $KDE_PREFIX/share</seg>
</seglistitem>

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<seglistitem>
<seg>appletproxy, drkonqi, extensionproxy, genkdmconf, kaccess,
kappfinder, kapplymousetheme, kasbar, kate, kblankscrn.kss,
kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcontrol,
kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcminit_startup,
kcontrol, kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
kdepasswd, kdeprintfax, kdesktop, kdesktop_lock, kdesu, kdesud, kdialog,
kdm, kdm_config, kdm_greet, kdmctl, keditbookmarks, keditfiletype,
kfind, kfmclient, kfontinst, kfontview, khc_docbookdig.pl, khc_htdig.pl,
khc_htsearch.pl, khc_indexbuilder, khc_mansearch.pl, khelpcenter,
khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter, kio_media_mounthelper,
khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter (link to kcontrol), kio_media_mounthelper,
kio_system_documenthelper, kjobviewer, klipper,
klocaldomainurifilterhelper, kmenuedit, knetattach, kompmgr, konqueror,
konsole, kpager, kpersonalizer, kpm, kprinter, krandom.kss, krandrtray,

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ksendbugmail, kshell, kstartupconfig, ksvgtopng, ktelnetservice,
ktradertest, kunittestmodrunner, kwrapper, lnusertemp,
make_driver_db_cups, make_driver_db_lpr, makekdewidgets, meinproc,
and preparetips</seg>
preparetips, and start_kdeinit</seg>
<seg>Numerous <application>KDE</application> libraries and helper
modules</seg>
<seg>/etc/kde and the following subdirectories of &kde-dir;/:

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<para>This section is really about creating a <emphasis>rescue</emphasis>
device. As the name <emphasis>rescue</emphasis> implies, the host
system has a problem, often lost partition information or corrupted file
systems, that prevent it from booting and/or operating normally. For
systems, that prevents it from booting and/or operating normally. For
this reason, you <emphasis>must not</emphasis> depend on resources from
the host being "rescued". To presume that any given partition or hard
drive <emphasis>will</emphasis> be available is a risky presumption.</para>

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<title>Configuration Information</title>
<para><application>Vim-7.0</application> introduced an
integrated spell checker that doesn't requires additional libraries to be
integrated spell checker that doesn't require additional libraries to be
installed. To enable the spell checker you can set the following in
one of the configuration files: </para>
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from: <ulink url="ftp://ftp.vim.org/pub/vim/runtime/spell/"/> and save
them to <filename class="directory"> ~/.vim/spell </filename> or in
<filename class="directory">
/usr/share/vim/vim70/spell/</filename>.</para>
/usr/share/vim/vim71/spell/</filename>.</para>
<para>For more information about the spell checker and some other
features in <application>Vim-&vim-version;</application> (such us
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<para>A list of the reinstalled files, along with their short
descriptions can be found in the <ulink
url="&lfs-root;/chapter06/vim.html#contents-vim">LFS Vim Installation
Instrutions</ulink></para>
Instructions</ulink></para>
<segmentedlist>
<segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>

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<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of ZSH</title>
<para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it the same
way you would the source tarball. The documentation will unpack into
the <filename class='directory'>Doc</filename> directory of the source
tree.</para>
<para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it with
the following command:</para>
<screen><userinput>tar --strip-components=1 -xvf ../zsh-&zsh-version;-doc.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
<para>Install <application>ZSH</application> by running the following
commands:</para>

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these properly, you will notice a resolution much lower than desired.
The default <option>HorizSync</option> setting is 28-33kHz which is very
conservative. The default <option>VertRefresh</option> is 43-72Hz.
Consult your monitor documentation or search on line for the proper
Consult your monitor documentation or search online for the proper
settings for your monitor.</para>
<para>It is also possible to control many detailed timing characteristics
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or via a graphical interface such as <application>KDE</application>'s
Control Center.</para>
<para>A typical monitor sections will normally look like:</para>
<para>A typical monitor section will normally look like:</para>
<screen><literal>Section "Monitor"
DisplaySize 400 300 # mm

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</note>
<para>A <ulink url='http://wiki.x.org/wiki/Development/Security'>security
vulnerability</ulink> have been identified in the xorg-server
vulnerability</ulink> has been identified in the xorg-server
package. Apply a patch to fix this vulnerability with the following
command:</para>

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<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
<para role="required"><xref linkend="guile"/>,
<xref linkend="slib"/>,
<xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>,
<xref linkend="goffice"/>, and
<xref linkend="gtkhtml"/></para>