From aa89d61b9ec624f6dde369aa6430dbdc9a47aa37 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 23 Jun 2014 02:23:18 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Editorial changes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@13306 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0
---
 xsoft/other/fontforge.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xsoft/other/fontforge.xml b/xsoft/other/fontforge.xml
index 23e08c48df..97823b84c1 100644
--- a/xsoft/other/fontforge.xml
+++ b/xsoft/other/fontforge.xml
@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>
-      <application>FontForge</application> tarball for this version was not
-      generated by the <application>FontForge</application> maintainers. The
-      source tarball shown above was created by the BLFS team by pulling a Git
-      version, then generating the autotools components and documentation.
-      BLFS team made no changes to the existing source files.
+      The <application>FontForge</application> tarball specified above was not
+      generated by the <application>FontForge</application> maintainers. It
+      was created by the BLFS team by pulling a Git version and then generating 
+      the autotools components and documentation. The BLFS team made no changes 
+      to the existing source files.
     </para>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">FontForge Dependencies</bridgehead>