diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
index 0d45e54f95..1c8a8a92bc 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
 <filename>adsl-setup</filename> script.</para>
 
 <para>When configuring your connection, you will need to have your 
-ISPs nameserver information availible , as well as your username and 
-password.  You will also be asked wether you want to configure a
-dial-on-demand or a constant connection.  If your service provider does
-not charge by the minute, it is usually good to have a bootscript handle 
-the connection for you.  You can, of course, choose not to install the 
+ISP's nameserver information availible, as well as your username and 
+password.  You will also be asked whether to configure a dial-on-demand 
+or a constant connection.  If your service provider does not charge by 
+the minute, it is usually good to have a bootscript handle the 
+connection for you.  You can, of course, choose not to install the 
 following script, and start your connection manually with the 
 <filename>adsl-start</filename> script.</para>
 
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
index 2a9ea8bbd5..169c979beb 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ in <filename>/etc/ppp/pppoe.conf</filename>.</para></sect3>
 specified in <filename>/etc/ppp/pppoe.conf</filename>.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>adsl-status</title><para>Displays the status of the adsl 
-connection</para></sect3>
+connection.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>adsl-stop</title><para>Stops the client.</para></sect3>
 
-<sect3><title>pppoe</title><para>This is the actual client itself.
-Generally it should not be started on it's own</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>pppoe</title><para>This is the client itself.
+Generally it should not be started on it's own.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>pppoe-relay</title><para>Starts the server relay 
 agent.</para></sect3>
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml
index ec28cf5491..84d8a7eadc 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para>These are the standard instalation commands that will install into
+<para>These are the standard installation commands that will install into
 the <userinput>/usr</userinput> prefix.  You can optionally use the 
 <userinput>'go'</userinput> script in the root of the source tree, to
-run the exact same commands, which are then, imediately followed by the 
+run the exact same commands, which are then, immediately followed by the 
 <userinput>adsl-setup</userinput> script.</para>
 
 </sect2>
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
index bee87b47ac..702c6687d7 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 <para><screen><userinput>cd src &amp;&amp;
 ./configure &amp;&amp;
 make &amp;&amp;
-make install &amp;&amp;</userinput></screen></para>
+make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
 </sect2>
 
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
index 64f02af023..41870cf724 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
@@ -7,19 +7,21 @@ Version used:                   &pppoe-version;
 Package size:                   &pppoe-size;
 Estimated Disk space required:  &pppoe-buildsize;</screen>
 
-<para>The Roaring Penguin PPPoE package contains both a client, and a 
-userspace server componenet that runs works with the client. The 
-client allows you to connect to large networks that use the PPPoE protocol, 
-common among ADSL providers.  The server component runs along side the 
-client, allowing you configure other clients that send out a configuration 
+<para>The Roaring Penguin PPPoE package contains both a client and a 
+server componenet that works with the client. The client allows you 
+to connect to large networks that use the PPPoE protocol, common among 
+ADSL providers.  The server component runs along side the client, 
+allowing you to configure other clients that send out a configuration 
 request.</para>
 
 <screen>RP-PPPoE depends on:
 <xref linkend="ppp"/></screen>
 
 <para>In addition, if you plan to use demand dialing, or kernel mode
-PPPoE, you need to patch ppp-2.4.1 and re-install.</para>
-<para>The patch can be downloaded from here: 
-<ulink url="&hfile-root;/ppp-2.4.1-pppoe-4.patch"/></para>
+PPPoE, you need to patch ppp-2.4.1 and re-install using the standard
+BLFS instructions.  The patch can be downloaded from here: 
+<ulink url="&hfile-root;/ppp-2.4.1-pppoe-4.patch"/>.   Additional
+information about kernel mode PPPoE can be found in 
+<filename>rp-pppoe-3.5/doc/KERNEL-MODE-PPPOE</filename>.</para>
 
 </sect2>