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<title>Organization</title>
<para>
This book is divided into the following parts.
This book is divided into the following fourteen parts.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part I - Introduction</bridgehead>
<para>
This part contains information which is essential to
the rest of the book.
This part contains essential information which is needed to
understand the rest of the book.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part II - Post LFS Configuration and Extra
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<para>
Here we introduce basic configuration and security issues. We also
discuss a range of editors, file systems, and shells which aren't covered
discuss a range of text editors, file systems, and shells which aren't covered
in the main LFS book.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part III - General Libraries and Utilities</bridgehead>
<para>
In this section we cover libraries which are often needed by the rest
of the book as well as system utilities. Information on Programming
In this section we cover libraries which are often needed throughout
the book, as well as system utilities. Information on programming
(including recompiling <application>GCC</application> to support its full
range of languages) concludes this part.
</para>
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<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part IV - Basic Networking</bridgehead>
<para>
Here we cover how to connect to a network when you aren't using the
simple static IP setup given in the main LFS book. Networking libraries
Here we explain how to connect to a network when you aren't using the
simple static IP setup presented in the main LFS book. Networking libraries
and command-line networking tools are also covered here.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part V - Servers</bridgehead>
<para>
Here we deal with setting up mail and other servers (such as
Here we show you how to set up mail and other servers (such as
<application>FTP</application>, <application>Apache</application>, etc.).
</para>
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<para>
This part explains how to set up a basic <application>X Window
System</application> installation along with some generic
System</application>, along with some generic
<application>X</application> libraries and Window managers.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part VII - KDE</bridgehead>
<para>
For those who want to use the <application>K Desktop
Environment</application> or some parts of it, this part covers it.
This part is for those who want to use the <application>K Desktop
Environment</application>, or parts of it.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part VIII - GNOME</bridgehead>
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<application>GNOME</application> and <application>KDE</application>.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XI - X Software</bridgehead>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XI - More X Software</bridgehead>
<para>
Office programs and graphical web browsers are important to most people.
They, along with some generic <application>X</application> software can be
They, and some generic <application>X</application> software, can be
found in this part of the book.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XII - Multimedia</bridgehead>
<para>
Here we cover setting multimedia libraries and drivers along with some
audio, video and CD-writing programs.
Here we cover multimedia libraries and drivers, along with some
audio, video, and CD-writing programs.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XIII - Printing, Scanning and
Typesetting (PST)</bridgehead>
<para>
The PST part of the book covers document handling with applications like
<application>Ghostscript</application>, <application>CUPS</application> and
<application>DocBook</application> to installing
This part covers document handling, from applications like
<application>Ghostscript</application>, <application>CUPS</application>, and
<application>DocBook</application>, all the way to
<application>texlive</application>.
</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Appendices</bridgehead>
<para>
The Appendices cover information which doesn't belong in the main
book; they are mainly there as a reference.
The Appendices present information which doesn't belong in the body of
book; they are included as reference material. The glossary of acronyms
is a handy feature.
</para>
</sect1>