diff --git a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrdao/cdrdao.ent b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrdao/cdrdao.ent index be5d27953d..437aaa57f0 100644 --- a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrdao/cdrdao.ent +++ b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrdao/cdrdao.ent @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ - + diff --git a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrtools/cdrtools-exp.xml b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrtools/cdrtools-exp.xml index 6b77474dcc..844779d079 100644 --- a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrtools/cdrtools-exp.xml +++ b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrtools/cdrtools-exp.xml @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ install directory from /opt/schily to /usr. DEFINSUSR=root DEFINSGRP=root: These -commands install all programs with root.root ownership instead of the default +commands install all programs with root:root ownership instead of the default bin:bin. diff --git a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdwriteutils.xml b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdwriteutils.xml index 2e9a613038..9685dcc2b2 100644 --- a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdwriteutils.xml +++ b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdwriteutils.xml @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ This chapter contains information on CD-writing in Linux. You will first have to configure your kernel for -CD-writing. We start by -discussing how to do this, then discuss installing the actual utilities. +CD-writing, which is discussed first. After that, +installing the acutal utilities is presented. Additional sources of information on CD-writing include: @@ -18,9 +18,6 @@ HOWTO CD-Recordable FAQ -Handling CD-Images - &multimedia-cdwriteutils-kernel; diff --git a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-desc.xml b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-desc.xml index 226affb9e8..48741c6304 100644 --- a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-desc.xml +++ b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-desc.xml @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ access. cdrwtool provides facilities to manage CD-RW drives, including formatting new disks, setting the read and write -speeds etc.. +speeds, etc. Example: cdrwtool -d /dev/scd0 -q prepares a new CD-RW for use and diff --git a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-intro.xml b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-intro.xml index 5e58c60e3a..660f2cc3c9 100644 --- a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-intro.xml +++ b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-intro.xml @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ The UDFtools package contains utilities for creating and mounting CD-RW disks with -udf file systems for both +UDF file systems for both reading and writing. UDF files systems are used on both CD-RW media and on DVD. For more details of the diff --git a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-kernel-inst.xml b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-kernel-inst.xml index a0debd7720..b16d403da8 100644 --- a/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-kernel-inst.xml +++ b/multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-kernel-inst.xml @@ -2,7 +2,8 @@ Installation of the kernel patch -Note that this patch can permenantly damage your CD drive if it is +Note that this patch can permanently damage your +CD drive if it is from one of the few mentioned at . Do not apply the patch without first checking out the article. @@ -22,7 +23,7 @@ File Systems UDF filesystems support (read only): Y UDF write support (DANGEROUS) Y -If necessary, recompile the kernel with +If necessary, recompile the kernel with: make CC=/opt/gcc-2.95.3/bin/gcc dep && make CC=/opt/gcc-2.95.3/bin/gcc bzImage && make CC=/opt/gcc-2.95.3/bin/gcc modules && @@ -31,11 +32,11 @@ make CC=/opt/gcc-2.95.3/bin/gcc modules_install Copy /usr/src/linux/arch/i386/boot/bzImage and /usr/src/linux/System.map to /boot. If you utilize -LILO edit /etc/lilo.conf +LILO, edit /etc/lilo.conf appropriately and run lilo. -If you build packet writer as a module, add the following to +If you built packet writer as a module, add the following to /etc/modules.conf: alias block-major-97 pktcdvd diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/avifile/avifile-desc.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/avifile/avifile-desc.xml index d1834eacfb..92f6a2d883 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/avifile/avifile-desc.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/avifile/avifile-desc.xml @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Video For Windows (vfw) compatible device, like a webcam or a TV-tuner. kv4lsetup kv4lsetup is a small tool which tells video4linux -about the current video mode +about the current video mode. avicat avicat takes a set of AVI files and diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml index fe3b5146c3..680385f280 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ ln -sf font-arial-iso-8859-1/font-arial-[font size]-i You can chose your font size of 14, 18, 24 or 28. -Set the proper permissions for CODECs, skins and fonts: +Set the proper ownership for CODECs, skins and fonts: chown -R root:root [CODECs location] && chown -R root:root /usr/share/mplayer diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml index 1a58f2eba1..b14829e0a9 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml @@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ mplayer -vo fbdev -fb /dev/fb0 dvd://1 -aid 128 -sub en -framedrop mplayer -fs vcd://1 # works both for VCDs and SVCDs mplayer http://www.students.uni-marburg.de/~Klossa/hapkidofight_lo.mpg -For further information, have a look at the very good -documentation included in the package in the subdirectory For further information, look at the very good +documentation included with the package in the source tree subdirectory DOCS/. diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml index d0a9dde076..42d25ca1fc 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ it: The GUI version of MPlayer requires a skin. Extract the default -one at recommended location: +one to the recommended location: install -d /usr/share/mplayer/Skin && tar xjvf ../default-1.8.tar.bz2 -C /usr/share/mplayer/Skin @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ from your DVD drive to /dev/dvd: ln -s /dev/[dvd drive] /dev/dvd Replace [dvd drive] with whatever -device is appropriate, for example /dev/hdc. if +device is appropriate, for example /dev/hdc. If you don't know which device to choose, type: dmesg | grep DVD @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ ATAPI CD/DVD-ROM drive If you have SCSI-Emulation activated for the drives, you'll need to get the right SCSI-device. Every CD/DVD-ROM drive is mapped in the -same order as in IDE to the devices named +same order as in IDE devices to the devices named /dev/scd0, /dev/scd1 and so on. diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml index 2e456c2453..2f265e4c12 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml @@ -2,8 +2,9 @@ Introduction to <application>MPlayer</application> The MPlayer package contains an audio/video player that is able to -play almost every audio and video CODEC and can be controlled by command -line or GUI. +play almost every audio and video CODEC and can be +controlled via the command +line or a GUI. Package information @@ -25,7 +26,7 @@ url="http://www1.mplayerhq.hu/MPlayer/releases/fonts/font-arial-iso-8859-1.tar.b -These are not required to build and use MPlayer. You can +The additional downloads are not required to build and use MPlayer. You can find many more CODECs, skins and fonts at MPlayer's homepage. diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml index 08ce231abc..0eca9f4025 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml @@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ and input/filter/output modules. transcode transcode is the encoder's user interface that handles the plugins and other programs, being the glue between the modules. -There are several well documented usage examples on either the homepage -or the documentation included in the package. +There are several well documented usage examples on both the homepage +and the documentation included in the package. tccat tccat concatenates input files using the input plugins @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ input data. AVI file. avidump -avidump dumps audio or video stream of an given +avidump dumps audio or video stream of a given AVI file to stdout (for AVI conversion or extraction of audio streams). diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-exp.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-exp.xml index 3666efa37a..85c1c40549 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-exp.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-exp.xml @@ -1,7 +1,8 @@ Command explanations ---without-x: Omit this switch if you have X +--without-x: Omit this switch if you have +an X Window System installed and you want to compile X11 dependent filter plugins. diff --git a/multimedia/videoutils/videoutils.xml b/multimedia/videoutils/videoutils.xml index f9faa3e966..c63c468112 100644 --- a/multimedia/videoutils/videoutils.xml +++ b/multimedia/videoutils/videoutils.xml @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ This chapter always seems to be the favorite chapter. It's probably because there is a lot of satisfaction in playing your first -video when you have spent so much time getting to that point. All the -libraries, all the configurations and your reward is that you get to +video when you have spent so much time getting to that point. All those +libraries, all the configurations and your reward is that you finally get to watch a movie. Not to worry though, there is always one more CODEC to install. diff --git a/pst/printing/cups/cups-config.xml b/pst/printing/cups/cups-config.xml index 446c0628d6..a7400aa5b7 100644 --- a/pst/printing/cups/cups-config.xml +++ b/pst/printing/cups/cups-config.xml @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ printers are easier. For detailed instructions on configuration and use of . The Software Administrators Manual and Software Users Manual are particularly useful. -For non-PostScript printers to print with CUPS you need to install +For non-PostScript printers to print with CUPS, you need to install to convert PostScript to raster images and a driver (e.g., from ) to convert the resulting raster images to a form that the printer understands. diff --git a/pst/printing/cups/cups-desc.xml b/pst/printing/cups/cups-desc.xml index 27fe7c9ddd..67d7af54c0 100644 --- a/pst/printing/cups/cups-desc.xml +++ b/pst/printing/cups/cups-desc.xml @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ and class queues provided by CUPS reject -reject reject instructs the printing system to +reject instructs the printing system to reject print jobs to the specified destinations. diff --git a/pst/printing/gimp-print/gimp-print-desc.xml b/pst/printing/gimp-print/gimp-print-desc.xml index abb2bdc5db..f7a539ecc2 100644 --- a/pst/printing/gimp-print/gimp-print-desc.xml +++ b/pst/printing/gimp-print/gimp-print-desc.xml @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ rastertoprinter filter for CUPS that converts the output of pstoraster to a form -understandable by printer, +understandable by printers, and a plugin that allows printing images from GIMP-1.2.5. diff --git a/pst/printing/lprng/lprng-config.xml b/pst/printing/lprng/lprng-config.xml index 29a0c884e5..9996049271 100644 --- a/pst/printing/lprng/lprng-config.xml +++ b/pst/printing/lprng/lprng-config.xml @@ -10,13 +10,13 @@ There is no generic printcap for all printers. A sample printcap is loaded into the etc -directory which can be some help. Information is also available at +directory which can be of some help. Information is also available at and . The init script installed by LPRng is not -consistent with other BLFS scripts; therefore, we will install -/etc/rc.d/init.d/lprng +consistent with other BLFS scripts; therefore, install +the /etc/rc.d/init.d/lprng init script included in the package. make install-lprng diff --git a/pst/scanning/sane/sane-exp.xml b/pst/scanning/sane/sane-exp.xml index f657b0bbd1..1778099d30 100644 --- a/pst/scanning/sane/sane-exp.xml +++ b/pst/scanning/sane/sane-exp.xml @@ -1,10 +1,6 @@ Installation command explanations ---prefix=/usr: This switch installs all -software in directories relative to -/usr. - --sysconfdir=/etc: This switch installs the configuration files in /etc/sane.d instead of /usr/etc/sane.d. diff --git a/pst/scanning/scanning.xml b/pst/scanning/scanning.xml index d7bb91d147..ca99dd56a8 100644 --- a/pst/scanning/scanning.xml +++ b/pst/scanning/scanning.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Scanning -This chapter contains scanning applications which allow us to +This chapter contains scanning applications which allow you to convert printed documents into formatted documents readable by other applications. diff --git a/pst/sgml/openjade/openjade-exp.xml b/pst/sgml/openjade/openjade-exp.xml index f5e35d6963..b6450c98de 100644 --- a/pst/sgml/openjade/openjade-exp.xml +++ b/pst/sgml/openjade/openjade-exp.xml @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ the building of the static library. for HTTP. --enable-default-catalog=/etc/sgml/catalog: This -switch sets the path to our centralized catalog. +switch sets the path to the centralized catalog. : This switch sets the default value of SGML_SEARCH_PATH. diff --git a/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-desc.xml b/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-desc.xml index f57ef08c3e..f6b788148b 100644 --- a/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-desc.xml +++ b/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-desc.xml @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Description onsgmls -onsgmls process SGML files. +onsgmls processes SGML files. ospam ospam is a markup stream editor. diff --git a/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-exp.xml b/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-exp.xml index e9fddf6a4c..8aeabe38e6 100644 --- a/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-exp.xml +++ b/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-exp.xml @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ the building of the static library. for HTTP. --enable-default-catalog=/etc/sgml/catalog: This -switch sets the path to our centralized catalog. +switch sets the path to the centralized catalog. : This switch sets the default value of SGML_SEARCH_PATH. diff --git a/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-intro.xml b/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-intro.xml index 2bf1efd3af..54f23b8578 100644 --- a/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-intro.xml +++ b/pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-intro.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Introduction to <application>OpenSP</application> The OpenSP package contains a -C++ Library for using +C++ library for using SGML/XML files. This is useful for validating, parsing and manipulating SGML and XML diff --git a/pst/sgml/sgml-common/sgml-common-inst.xml b/pst/sgml/sgml-common/sgml-common-inst.xml index 237d4240a7..c2d324be85 100644 --- a/pst/sgml/sgml-common/sgml-common-inst.xml +++ b/pst/sgml/sgml-common/sgml-common-inst.xml @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ patch -Np1 -i ../sgml-common-0.6.3-manpage-1.patch -The autotools files included along with sgml-common are old. Use the following +The autotools files included with sgml-common are old. Use the following commands to regenerate the files. aclocal &&