diff --git a/appendices/glossary.xml b/appendices/glossary.xml index 6d77bd1d89..d3e7f0ce3c 100644 --- a/appendices/glossary.xml +++ b/appendices/glossary.xml @@ -61,6 +61,10 @@ imon Inode MONitor +IP +Internet ProtocolTCP + + ISP Internet Service Provider @@ -89,9 +93,15 @@ otherterm="gCORBA">CORBA PPPoE Point to Point Protocol over Ethernet +RFC +Request For Comments + RP Roaring Penguin +TCP +Transmission Control Protocol + XMMS X MultiMedia System diff --git a/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml b/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml index b1bb2be48e..c2defbf94d 100644 --- a/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml +++ b/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ -dhcp-&dhcp-version; +DHCP-&dhcp-version; -The dhcp package comes with both a client -(called dhclient) and a server program for using -DHCP. If you want to install this package, +The DHCP package comes with +both a client (called dhclient) and a server program for +using DHCP. If you want to install this package, the instructions can be found at . Note that if you only want to use the client, you do not need to run the server and so do not need diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp.xml index 069dd67486..a5a8b27565 100644 --- a/connect/dialup/ppp.xml +++ b/connect/dialup/ppp.xml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + -ppp-&ppp-version; +PPP-&ppp-version; &ppp-intro; &ppp-inst; diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml index 7c910f6f4a..6a914eb63d 100644 --- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml +++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ -Configuring <application>ppp</application> +Configuring <application><acronym>PPP</acronym></application> Config files /etc/ppp/* @@ -7,10 +7,10 @@ Configuration Information -The ppp daemon itself requires very little configuration. The -main trick is scripting the connection. This can be done either using the -chat program which comes with this package or by using . +The PPP daemon itself +requires very little configuration. The main trick is scripting the +connection. This can be done either using the chat program which comes with +this package or by using . diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml index 874a8fef2c..ee78df5d93 100644 --- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml +++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ Contents -The ppp package contains the -chat, +The PPP package contains +the chat, pppd, pppdump and pppstats programs. @@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ connection between the Point-to-Point Protocol Daemon pppdump pppdump is used to convert -PPP record files +PPP record files to a readable format. pppstats pppstats is used to print -PPP statistics. +PPP statistics. diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml index 3fa7a586ec..a1873fec80 100644 --- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml +++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ -Installation of <application>ppp</application> +Installation of <application><acronym>PPP</acronym></application> -PPP support must be compiled into the -kernel or available as a kernel module. +PPP support must be +compiled into the kernel or available as a kernel module. -Install ppp by running the following commands: - +Install PPP by running the +following commands: ./configure && make && diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml index a8af19d46e..4454ffdae5 100644 --- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml +++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ -Introduction to <application>ppp</application> +Introduction to <application><acronym>PPP</acronym></application> -The ppp package contains the pppd - daemon and the chat program. +The PPP package contains +the pppd daemon and the chat program. This is used for connecting to other machines; often for connecting to the Internet via a dial-up connection to an ISP. diff --git a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml index 9ee3530f2b..a0711fe33f 100644 --- a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml +++ b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ and try to determine it's exact setup. You will then need to enter your /etc/wvdial.conf file. You then start wvdial with: -wvdial. +wvdial For more information examine the wvdialconf, wvdial.conf and wvdial man pages. diff --git a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml index 302ed80fe2..3789992d97 100644 --- a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml +++ b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ and wvdialconf programs. Description wvdial -Starts a ppp connection. +Starts a PPP connection. wvdialconf Automates the configuration of wvdial. diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml index 930f1138c1..326146b1e7 100644 --- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml +++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ -Configuring <application><acronym>RP-PPPoE</acronym></application> +Configuring <application><acronym>RP</acronym>-<acronym>PPPoE</acronym></application> Config files /etc/ppp/pppoe.conf, @@ -12,8 +12,9 @@ Configuration Information -To configure RP-PPPoE after -installation, you should run the adsl-setup script. +To configure RP-PPPoE + after installation, you should run the adsl-setup + script. When configuring your connection, you will need to have your ISP's nameserver information available, as well as your diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml index 7e13096996..09c6c445ee 100644 --- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml +++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ Contents -The RP-PPPoE package +The RP-PPPoE package contains adsl-setup, adsl-start, adsl-status, adsl-stop, pppoe, pppoe-relay, pppoe-server @@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ in /etc/ppp/pppoe.conf. specified in /etc/ppp/pppoe.conf. adsl-status -adsl-status displays the status of the adsl connection. - +adsl-status displays the status of the +ADSL connection. adsl-stop adsl-stop stops the client. diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml index 428a87d3f5..0943e968d6 100644 --- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml +++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ -Installation of <application><acronym>RP-PPPoE</acronym></application> +Installation of <application><acronym>RP</acronym>-<acronym>PPPoE</acronym></application> If you plan on using demand dialing, or kernel mode PPPoE, you need to patch and @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ patch can be downloaded from here: information about kernel mode PPPoE can be found in rp-pppoe-&pppoe-version;/doc/KERNEL-MODE-PPPOE. -Install RP-PPPoE by running +Install RP-PPPoE by running the following commands: cd src && diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml index e8881a23ee..bf8d035ee8 100644 --- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml +++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ -Introduction to <application><acronym>RP-PPPoE</acronym></application> +Introduction to <application><acronym>RP</acronym>-<acronym>PPPoE</acronym></application> The Roaring Penguin PPPoE package contains both a client and a server component that works with the @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ url="&pppoe-download-ftp;"/> &pppoe-time; -<application><acronym>RP-PPPoE</acronym></application> dependencies +<application><acronym>RP</acronym>-<acronym>PPPoE</acronym></application> dependencies Required diff --git a/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml b/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml index 7af84814e0..0dc9ab30f7 100644 --- a/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml +++ b/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Reinstall shadow by running the following commands: -patch -Np1 -i ../shadow-4.0.3-pam.patch && +patch -Np1 -i ../shadow-4.0.3-pamfix-1.patch && LDFLAGS="-lpam -lpam_misc" ./configure --prefix=/usr --libdir=/usr/lib \ --enable-shared --with-libpam && make &&