diff --git a/appendices/glossary.xml b/appendices/glossary.xml
index 6d77bd1d89..d3e7f0ce3c 100644
--- a/appendices/glossary.xml
+++ b/appendices/glossary.xml
@@ -61,6 +61,10 @@
imon
Inode MONitor
+IP
+Internet ProtocolTCP
+
+
ISP
Internet Service Provider
@@ -89,9 +93,15 @@ otherterm="gCORBA">CORBA
PPPoE
Point to Point Protocol over Ethernet
+RFC
+Request For Comments
+
RP
Roaring Penguin
+TCP
+Transmission Control Protocol
+
XMMS
X MultiMedia System
diff --git a/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml b/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml
index b1bb2be48e..c2defbf94d 100644
--- a/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml
+++ b/connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-dhcp-&dhcp-version;
+DHCP-&dhcp-version;
-The dhcp package comes with both a client
-(called dhclient) and a server program for using
-DHCP. If you want to install this package,
+The DHCP package comes with
+both a client (called dhclient) and a server program for
+using DHCP. If you want to install this package,
the instructions can be found at .
Note that if you only want to use the client, you
do not need to run the server and so do not need
diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp.xml
index 069dd67486..a5a8b27565 100644
--- a/connect/dialup/ppp.xml
+++ b/connect/dialup/ppp.xml
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-
+
-ppp-&ppp-version;
+PPP-&ppp-version;
&ppp-intro;
&ppp-inst;
diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml
index 7c910f6f4a..6a914eb63d 100644
--- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml
+++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-config.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Configuring ppp
+Configuring PPP
Config files
/etc/ppp/*
@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@
Configuration Information
-The ppp daemon itself requires very little configuration. The
-main trick is scripting the connection. This can be done either using the
-chat program which comes with this package or by using .
+The PPP daemon itself
+requires very little configuration. The main trick is scripting the
+connection. This can be done either using the chat program which comes with
+this package or by using .
diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml
index 874a8fef2c..ee78df5d93 100644
--- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml
+++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-desc.xml
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
Contents
-The ppp package contains the
-chat,
+The PPP package contains
+the chat,
pppd, pppdump and
pppstats programs.
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ connection between the Point-to-Point Protocol Daemon
pppdump
pppdump is used to convert
-PPP record files
+PPP record files
to a readable format.
pppstats
pppstats is used to print
-PPP statistics.
+PPP statistics.
diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml
index 3fa7a586ec..a1873fec80 100644
--- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml
+++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-inst.xml
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
-Installation of ppp
+Installation of PPP
-PPP support must be compiled into the
-kernel or available as a kernel module.
+PPP support must be
+compiled into the kernel or available as a kernel module.
-Install ppp by running the following commands:
-
+Install PPP by running the
+following commands:
./configure &&
make &&
diff --git a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml
index a8af19d46e..4454ffdae5 100644
--- a/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml
+++ b/connect/dialup/ppp/ppp-intro.xml
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-Introduction to ppp
+Introduction to PPP
-The ppp package contains the pppd
- daemon and the chat program.
+The PPP package contains
+the pppd daemon and the chat program.
This is used for connecting to other machines; often for connecting to
the Internet via a dial-up connection to an ISP.
diff --git a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml
index 9ee3530f2b..a0711fe33f 100644
--- a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml
+++ b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-config.xml
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ and try to determine it's exact setup. You will then need to enter your
/etc/wvdial.conf file.
You then start wvdial with:
-wvdial.
+wvdial
For more information examine the wvdialconf, wvdial.conf and wvdial man pages.
diff --git a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml
index 302ed80fe2..3789992d97 100644
--- a/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml
+++ b/connect/dialup/wvdial/wvdial-desc.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ and wvdialconf programs.
Description
wvdial
-Starts a ppp connection.
+Starts a PPP connection.
wvdialconf
Automates the configuration of wvdial.
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
index 930f1138c1..326146b1e7 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Configuring RP-PPPoE
+Configuring RP-PPPoE
Config files
/etc/ppp/pppoe.conf,
@@ -12,8 +12,9 @@
Configuration Information
-To configure RP-PPPoE after
-installation, you should run the adsl-setup script.
+To configure RP-PPPoE
+ after installation, you should run the adsl-setup
+ script.
When configuring your connection, you will need to have your
ISP's nameserver information available, as well as your
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
index 7e13096996..09c6c445ee 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
Contents
-The RP-PPPoE package
+The RP-PPPoE package
contains adsl-setup, adsl-start,
adsl-status, adsl-stop,
pppoe, pppoe-relay, pppoe-server
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ in /etc/ppp/pppoe.conf.
specified in /etc/ppp/pppoe.conf.
adsl-status
-adsl-status displays the status of the adsl connection.
-
+adsl-status displays the status of the
+ADSL connection.
adsl-stop
adsl-stop stops the client.
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
index 428a87d3f5..0943e968d6 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Installation of RP-PPPoE
+Installation of RP-PPPoE
If you plan on using demand dialing, or kernel mode
PPPoE, you need to patch and
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ patch can be downloaded from here:
information about kernel mode PPPoE can be found in
rp-pppoe-&pppoe-version;/doc/KERNEL-MODE-PPPOE.
-Install RP-PPPoE by running
+Install RP-PPPoE by running
the following commands:
cd src &&
diff --git a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
index e8881a23ee..bf8d035ee8 100644
--- a/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
+++ b/connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Introduction to RP-PPPoE
+Introduction to RP-PPPoE
The Roaring Penguin PPPoE
package contains both a client and a server component that works with the
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ url="&pppoe-download-ftp;"/>
&pppoe-time;
-RP-PPPoE dependencies
+RP-PPPoE dependencies
Required
diff --git a/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml b/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml
index 7af84814e0..0dc9ab30f7 100644
--- a/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml
+++ b/postlfs/security/shadow/shadow-inst.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
Reinstall shadow by running the following commands:
-patch -Np1 -i ../shadow-4.0.3-pam.patch &&
+patch -Np1 -i ../shadow-4.0.3-pamfix-1.patch &&
LDFLAGS="-lpam -lpam_misc" ./configure --prefix=/usr --libdir=/usr/lib \
--enable-shared --with-libpam &&
make &&