diff --git a/book/foreword.xml b/book/foreword.xml index 71fdb493fb..782cdd0609 100644 --- a/book/foreword.xml +++ b/book/foreword.xml @@ -15,119 +15,11 @@ Foreword - - - This is the development version of the BLFS book. This version of the - book is intended to be used when building on top of a system built using the - LFS development book as well as the current stable version of LFS. Though this - version of the book is development in nature, every effort has been made to - ensure accuracy and reliability of the instructions. Many people find that - using the instructions in this book after building the current stable or - development version of LFS provides a stable and very modern Linux system. - - + This version of the book is intended to be used when building on top of + a system built using the LFS book. Every effort has been made to ensure + accuracy and reliability of the instructions. Many people find that using the + instructions in this book after building the current stable or development + version of LFS provides a stable and very modern Linux system. Enjoy! diff --git a/introduction/welcome/credits.xml b/introduction/welcome/credits.xml index 7e0fde58d1..62f13501ad 100644 --- a/introduction/welcome/credits.xml +++ b/introduction/welcome/credits.xml @@ -26,7 +26,6 @@ - Fernando de Oliveira Bruce Dubbs Pierre Labastie Ken Moffat @@ -75,6 +74,7 @@ Randy McMurchy Denis Mugnier Billy O'Connor + Fernando de Oliveira Alexander Patrakov Olivier Peres Andreas Pedersen diff --git a/introduction/welcome/packages.xml b/introduction/welcome/packages.xml index 5b676abe30..51de0d30e3 100644 --- a/introduction/welcome/packages.xml +++ b/introduction/welcome/packages.xml @@ -22,11 +22,14 @@ continuous flux. Packages are sometimes moved or updated and the exact URL specified is not always available. - To overcome this problem, the BLFS Team, with the assistance of Server Beach, has made an HTTP/FTP - site available at anduin.&lfs-domainname;. This site - has all the sources of the exact versions of the packages used in BLFS. If - you can't find the BLFS package you need, get it there. + To overcome this problem, the BLFS Team, with the assistance of Oregon + State University Open Source Lab, has made an HTTP/FTP site available whtough + world wide mirrors. See + http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/download.html#sources for a + list. These sites have all the sources of the exact versions of the packages + used in BLFS. If you can't find the BLFS package you need at the listed + addresses, get it from these sites. We would like to ask a favor, however. Although this is a public resource for you to use, please do not abuse it. We have already had one diff --git a/introduction/welcome/version.xml b/introduction/welcome/version.xml index e2ea85af13..f5f352b2bc 100644 --- a/introduction/welcome/version.xml +++ b/introduction/welcome/version.xml @@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ Book Version This is BLFS-BOOK version &version; dated &releasedate;. This is the - development branch of the BLFS book, currently targeting the LFS development - book. If this version (&version;) is older than a month, it's likely that - your mirror hasn't been synchronized recently and a newer version is probably - available for download or viewing. Check one of the mirror sites at - for an updated - version. + &blfs-version; branch of the BLFS book, currently targeting the LFS + &lfs-version; book. For development versions, if this version is older than a + month, it's likely that your mirror hasn't been synchronized recently and a + newer version is probably available for download or viewing. Check one of the + mirror sites at for + an updated version.