Proper names, class=directory on chapter 35

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gnome/config/config-core.xml

@@ -3,14 +3,16 @@
 <title>Configuring the core GNOME packages</title>
 
 
-<para>Create an <filename>.xinitrc</filename> file to start GNOME:
+<para>Create an <filename>.xinitrc</filename> file to start
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application>:
 <screen><userinput><command>echo "exec gnome-session" &gt;&gt;
 ~/.xinitrc</command></userinput></screen>
 and ensure all libraries can be found with:
 <screen><userinput><command>ldconfig</command></userinput></screen>
 </para>
 
-<para>At this point you can bring up GNOME with
+<para>At this point you can bring up
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> with
 <command>startx</command>.</para>
 
 </sect1>

gnome/config/config.xml

@@ -2,6 +2,10 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="config.html" dir="gnome"?>
 <title>Configuring GNOME</title>
 
+<para>This chapter makes
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> your Desktop of
+choice when <command>startx</command> is run.</para>
+
 &gnome-config-core;
 
 </chapter>

gnome/other/gconf-editor.xml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<sect1 id="gconf-editor" xreflabel="gconf-editor-&gconf-editor-version;">
+<sect1 id="gconf-editor" xreflabel="GConf Editor-&gconf-editor-version;">
 <?dbhtml filename="gconf-editor.html" dir="gnome"?>
-<title>gconf-editor-&gconf-editor-version;</title>
+<title>GConf Editor-&gconf-editor-version;</title>
 
 &gconf-editor-intro;
 &gconf-editor-inst;

gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-desc.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<para>The <application>gconf-editor package</application> contains
+<para>The <application>GConf Editor</application> package contains
 <command>gconf-editor</command>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
@@ -9,7 +9,8 @@
 <sect2><title>Description</title>
 
 <sect3><title>gconf-editor</title>
-<para><command>gconf-editor</command> allows direct modification of the GConf
+<para><command>gconf-editor</command> allows direct modification of the
+<application>GConf</application>
 configuration database.</para></sect3>
 
 

gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-inst.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Installation of <application>gconf-editor</application></title>
+<title>Installation of <application>GConf Editor</application></title>
 
-<para>Install <application>gconf-editor</application> by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install <application>GConf Editor</application> by running the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>./configure --prefix=$GNOME_PREFIX &amp;&amp;
 make &amp;&amp;

gnome/other/gconf-editor/gconf-editor-intro.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Introduction to <application>gconf-editor</application></title>
+<title>Introduction to <application>GConf Editor</application></title>
 
-<para>The <application>gconf-editor</application> package contains a
+<para>The <application>GConf Editor</application> package contains a
 <acronym>GUI</acronym> editor for the <application>GConf</application>
 configuration database.</para>
 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ url="&gconf-editor-download-ftp;"/></para></listitem>
 &gconf-editor-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
                                                                                 
-<sect3><title><application>gconf-editor</application> dependencies</title>
+<sect3><title><application>GConf Editor</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
 <para><xref linkend="GConf"/></para></sect4>
 </sect3>

gnome/other/gdm.xml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<sect1 id="gdm" xreflabel="gdm-&gdm-version;">
+<sect1 id="gdm" xreflabel="GDM-&gdm-version;">
 <?dbhtml filename="gdm.html" dir="gnome"?>
-<title>gdm-&gdm-version;</title>
+<title>GDM-&gdm-version;</title>
 
 &gdm-intro;
 &gdm-inst;

gnome/other/gdm/gdm-config.xml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Configuring <application>gdm</application></title>
+<title>Configuring <application>GDM</application></title>
 
 <sect3><title>Config files</title>
 <para><filename>/opt/gnome2/gdm.conf</filename>, <filename>/opt/gnome2/gnomerc</filename></para>
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-<para>The <application>gdm</application> <application>PAM</application>
+<para>The <application>GDM</application> <application>PAM</application>
 config files contain modules not present in a <acronym>BLFS</acronym>
 installation.  The following commands will replace those files:</para>
 <screen><userinput><command>cat &gt; /etc/pam.d/gdm &lt;&lt; "EOF"</command>
@@ -44,24 +44,24 @@ source $rc_functions
 
 case "$1" in
         start)
-                echo "Starting gdm..."
+                echo "Starting GDM..."
                 loadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/bin/gdm
                 ;;
 
         stop)
-                echo "Stopping gdm..."
+                echo "Stopping GDM..."
 		if [ -f /var/run/gdm.pid ]; then
                 loadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/sbin/gdm-stop
 		fi
                 ;;
 
         reload)
-                echo "Reloading gdm..."
+                echo "Reloading GDM..."
                 reloadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/sbin/gdm-safe-restart
                 ;;
 
         restart)
-                echo "Restarting gdm..."
+                echo "Restarting GDM..."
 		loadproc /opt/gnome-&gnome-version;/sbin/gdm-restart
                 ;;
 

gnome/other/gdm/gdm-desc.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<para>The gdm package contains <command>gdm</command>,
+<para>The <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> package contains <command>gdm</command>,
 <command>gdm-binary</command>,
 <command>gdmXnestchooser</command>,
 <command>gdmchooser</command>,
@@ -19,8 +19,9 @@
 <sect2><title>Description</title>
 
 <sect3><title>gdm</title>
-<para><command>gdm</command> is a wrapper script to execute gdm-binary, the configurable
+<para><command>gdm</command> is a wrapper script to execute the
-GNOME-based login prompt.</para></sect3>
+<application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> binary, the configurable
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> based login prompt.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>gdmchooser</title>
 <para><command>gdmchooser</command> is an application for selecting
@@ -34,13 +35,13 @@ the local network.</para></sect3>
 <sect3><title>gdm-restart and gdm-safe-restart</title>
 <para><command>gdm-restart</command> sends the <acronym>HUP</acronym>
 signal and <command>gdm-safe-restart</command> sends the
-<acronym>USR1</acronym> signal to the daemon so that it restarts. They are used after the
+<acronym>USR</acronym>1 signal to the daemon so that it restarts. They are used after the
 config file is edited.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>gdmconfig</title>
 <para><command>gdmconfig</command> is an application for managing the configuration of the
 entire <application>GDM</application> applications suite.  It handles look and feel, security,
-XDMCP, GDMchooser and more.</para></sect3>
+<acronym>XDMCP</acronym>, GDMchooser and more.</para></sect3>
 
 </sect2>
 

gnome/other/gdm/gdm-exp.xml

@@ -1,17 +1,18 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><command>--sysconfdir=/etc/gnome :</command> This command puts
+<para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc/gnome</parameter>: This command puts
-configuration files in <filename>/etc/gnome</filename> instead of
+configuration files in <filename class="directory">/etc/gnome</filename> instead of
-<filename>/opt/gnome2/etc</filename>.</para>
+<filename class="directory">/opt/gnome2/etc</filename>.</para>
 
-<para><command>--localstatedir=/var/lib :</command> This command
+<para><parameter>--localstatedir=/var/lib</parameter>: This command
-puts files in <filename>/var/lib</filename> instead of
+puts files in <filename class="directory">/var/lib</filename> instead of
-<filename>/opt/gnome2/var</filename>.</para>
+<filename class="directory">/opt/gnome2/var</filename>.</para>
 
-<para><command>--with-pam-prefix=/etc :</command> This command puts pam
+<para><parameter>--with-pam-prefix=/etc</parameter>: This command puts
-configuration files in <filename>/etc/pam.d</filename> instead of
+<application><acronym>PAM</acronym></application>
-<filename>/etc/gnome</filename>.</para>
+configuration files in <filename class="directory">/etc/pam.d</filename> instead of
+<filename class="directory">/etc/gnome</filename>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
 

gnome/other/gdm/gdm-inst.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Installation of <application>gdm</application></title>
+<title>Installation of <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application></title>
 
-<para>Install <application>gdm</application> by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> by running the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>groupadd gdm &amp;&amp;
 useradd -c gdm -d /dev/null -g gdm -s /bin/bash gdm &amp;&amp;

gnome/other/gdm/gdm-intro.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 <sect2>
-<title>Introduction to <application>gdm</application></title>
+<title>Introduction to <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application></title>
 
-<para>The <application>gdm</application> package contains GNOME's display manager daemon. This is
+<para>The <application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> package
+contains <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application>'s Display Manager daemon. This is
 useful for allowing configurable graphical logins.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
@@ -17,7 +18,7 @@ url="&gdm-download-ftp;"/></para></listitem>
 &gdm-time;</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
 </sect3>
                                                                                 
-<sect3><title><application>gdm</application> dependencies</title>
+<sect3><title><application><acronym>GDM</acronym></application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
 <para><xref linkend="librsvg"/> and <xref linkend="libgnome"/></para></sect4>
 <sect4><title>Optional</title>

gnome/other/other.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="other.html" dir="gnome"?>
 <title>Other GNOME Packages</title>
 
-<para>This section will contains other GNOME packages.</para>
+<para>This section will contains other
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> packages.</para>
 
 &gconf-editor;
 &gdm;